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I didn't really like this game. it felt just kinda generic. The pixel artwork was alright, fit the tone. The gameplay wasn't really there but it's mainly the story i didn't like. There were some typos, and it just kinda felt generic. Not really anything happened, it wasn't really that scary. It just feels kinda surface level. Also, i'd suggest making it so that when you leave a door, instead of spawning back at the very end of the room, maybe spawning at the door you entered would work better. While i didn't like it, i definitely don't want to discourage you from continuing any future works. You clearly have some talent, and some ideas. They just need to be worked on a bit more. Keep creating, and trying new things.

Apple952 responds:

Thank you very much for your feedback. When I made this game I hated it. The menu, the story, everything. This is the first version. In fact it was my first "full game". There are many, many mistakes with it. But as the saying goes "Once you're at the bottom of the ladder, the only way to go is up". I will try to better this game further into the future.